Monday, 15 December 2014

Life

So for those of you who read my blog, you'll know that I write mostly fantasy works. And I do really enjoy writing those.

But sometimes, life is much more interesting than my made up, perfect, villain and hero filled world.

Real life is very relatable. And also, consequently more fun, more real, and more interesting.

So I have been trying to write more of what I know rather than what's in my head. :) (as sometimes my head us very dull and tired of creating new worlds. My brain apologizes.)

And bonus content!

Here are some of my writing prompts I'm using, feel free to use them as well. :)

1. The house that spoke. (Title)

2. What is it about certain  people that makes you wish you were them?

3. Maybe she was pushed to far. Maybe that's why she went over the edge. (Oooh, dramatic, I know. Sorry bout that. :))

4. It was almost Christmas. I remember clearly walking down Whitehall road and admiring the hustle and bustle of the city.

Happy writing!
Scarlett

Tuesday, 14 October 2014

Best experiment ever!

I really want to apologize for my lack of posts. But, if it makes it any better, I've been busy and I'm sick. Soooooooo, yehp.

So I went to Greece over the summer. And it was as amazing as it sounds. All in all, it was an awesome trip! I saw all the famous old sites in Athens, then stopped at Delphi, continued to the old capitol, Nafplio. We swam in super clear water too. :) Then we went to an island to just relax. The water was so clear and the sand was so soft! Then we went to another island, Oia, Santorini. We went to a beach and oh. My. Word. The water was so blue it was ridiculous! Then the second day we went on a catamaran that took us (and 45 other people, and it was considered a small boat tour as well...heh heh) to thermal springs at the base of an island inhabited by a dormant volcano. Our next stop was at an extremely blue beach, that also happened to be extremely cold. But the best part was a the last stop, the white beach. The water was about 15 feet deep, but we could see straight to the bottom. Then, we were able to go snorkeling at this beach. It was amazing!

Also, any Beatrix Potter fans out there on the World Wide Web? We went to the lake district in England this summer as well, where Potter's books are set. We climbed the famous Cat Bells and generally it was amazing, except for some slight complications on the way back home....:)

Then Addison and I went on this FABULOUS AND AWESOME AND GENERALLY AMAZING camp called Soul Survivor. We actually had to sleep in tents, and haha, believe it or not, it was very windy and very difficult to put a tent up. But it was an awesome camp with amazing speakers, and if your interested, you can check out some the talks from the organization here. Mike Pilavachi is so hilarious and is a great speaker. But anyways we had a dry paint fight which was awesome too. :) If you ever get a chance to go, please do!

And two Sunday's ago, I went to Houston!! Which was awesome and cool because it was just me and my dad, and my dad was working so I was spoiled by my grandparents. :) And I flew in last Friday, and have been jetlagged ever since. The end.

Okay that is the end of my brief history of my oh-so-important summer of 2014. 

And really quick, I want to tell everyone a new favorite band: Of Monster's and Men. (Which I'm sure you've heard of, but in case you haven't...:)) And one of my childhood favorites: Eric Hutchinson. He just came out with a new album, Pure Fiction. I really encourage you to check him out!

But to the point, shall we? :)

So recently, I was watching an Of Monsters' and Men music video. (because I can't afford to buy the songs. :)) And I scrolled down to the comments, and someone had asked what the music video was about. Someone had explained and all but then another person had commented saying she decided to write a story about it because it was so interesting and different. And that got me thinking.

So I picked out songs (Watch the music video, if all it is someone playing an instrument and singing, just make up a story from the lyrics..) that I am going to create a story on and  that I encourage you to write a story on them. Either keep it to yourself, share in the comments, or post on your own blog. But I will write the stories and post them
later on a separate post. :) Enjoy!

1. "Forever" Eric Hutchinson; Pure Fiction

2. "Mykonos" Fleet Foxes

3. "Never Gonna Change" Broods; Evergreen

So yup have fun, knock yourself out. :)

Happy Writing!
Scarlet





Tuesday, 17 June 2014

OH MY GOSH I'M SO SORRY I LOVE YOU ALL SO MUCH!!

OH MY GOSH I'M SO SORRY I FORGOT TO POST AND YEAH I LOVE YOU ALL SO MUCH AND DON'T BE ANGRY.

Yeah, erm, sorry about the lack of posts. I went to Florida two weeks ago! Yep, pretty epic, all my British friends have tan envy. :) Anyways, the beach was epic. And yes, it did get me back on a writing high. YAY YAY YAY! But, as it is, since it was a ten hour flight, I flew twenty hours in one week. But, on the plus side, I finally watched Spider-Man with Andrew Garfield, X-men first class, Saving Mr. Banks, Frozen (for about the fourth time), and the Secret Life of Walter Mitty, and Mean Girls. So....Who's really the winner here? :)

Sadly, I was jet-lagged during my trip in Florida, then, on the second to last day, it wore off. Still unfortunate because then I had to get back to London time. So, yep. But I really enjoyed hanging out with my amazing cousins, aunts, uncles and grandparents. :) Plus, eating Mexican food and hearing American accents weren't half bad. ;)

But, yeup. So, I've just been trying to hunker down and finish school because I might be able to make this next week my last of school. So that left no time to write or anything, but I have managaed to read.

Last month I read nothing. These past three weeks I've read:

-The Maze Runner
-The Mortal Instruments: City of Bones
-Harry Potter and the Order of the Pheonix
- (just half) The Book Thief

Yerp, tons of reading. :) But that is not really the point, just thought you guys might like to know that I haven't been completely slacking from all writing/blogging/reading responsibilities. :)

But, I haven't posted a short story in a while. And before you get excited for a short story, not gonna happen.

So me, being the crazy perfectionist I am, decided to outline all my short stories. And I found a common theme in one. And I decided to combine this story and this story and a future story into one big story: The 365 Minute War

Yep, promises to be exciting. :)

And yep, that's all I have. :)

Actually though, one more thing, if ya have a minute. So this band, the Lighthouse and the Whaler, I really enjoy. And I also enjoy a band Rosie and I. And more importantly (since I plan to teach myself ukelele over the summer) this band Hellogoodbye: Ukelele Recordings. They are really amazing, especially for summer.

Now that is seriously it. :)

Happy Writing!
Scarlett

Wednesday, 28 May 2014

Insanity at its Best

Welcome, gentle reader. I just discovered this amazing band (a year or two late, but hey, better late than never?) The Freelance Whales. I’ve really been enjoying them because, I have writers block. And coincedentally, blogging block. So, of course, I’ve just been listening to all kinds of music hoping to somehow jog myself into writing. So far, not working.

But, not worried because Friday I leave for Florida! And, that will probably give me a writing high for about a week. :) And, I’m going to be able to see some old friends in a few weeks! So, all in all, yep, that’s life right now.

But, anyways. I’m not going to skimp on the post like I did last post. Ahem, I have had a revelation. I’m not sure if anyone else knew this, or everyone knew this, but I just noticed, so please, don’t judge. ;)

I used to think that the only “normal” characters in books were the hero. But...that is not the case. Actually, thinking about that, I realized heroes are the most not normal, but still normal enough, characters, excepting the antag.

Example? Using my favorite example: Divergent.  Tris is actually really not normal. Take Christina, for example. Perfectly happy, still enough feelings, flaws, and has a normal boyfriend. But she still has enough dynamics to make us like her, possibly more than Tris. (In a friend way, not in that back-up-your-hero-and-go-kill-some-bad-guys way that you like Tris and other heroes.)

Versus Tris, who is perfectly at peace with herself (Which can be a good thing) and is one of those I’m-good-all-by-myself-never-tell-friends-anything people (and not saying that’s a bad thing, I’m one of those I’m-good-all-by-myself people, but I tell my friends literally everything. In real life, the I’m-good-all-by-myself-never-tell-friends-anything people are not bad, but in books they are a bit boring and irritating to read about.

Now, though, of course, lets not stereotype. Some heroes are supposed to be insane and irrational and not normal. Take Ender Wiggin from Ender’s Game, for an example of this. From the very, very, very  beginning of the book, we see Ender is Wiggin isn’t normal. Great, point taken, now we can appreciate him in his not normal way.

And before you go, “Wait a minute, Scarlet. You have a flaw in your logic. Tris is supposed to be divergent. Duh.” I am using normal in the mentally stable, normal human reactions way. You know, feelings and emotions and stuff.

So, there you have it, I think heroes are insane. Don’t believe me? Put yourself in any heroes shoes. You have to literally be insane to go in, with a few people, and try to defeat the great enemy. So, yeah, insanity at its best. :)

Happy Writing!
Scarlet




Friday, 16 May 2014

I guess I need to say something....

I apologize for the absence of posts. *bows majestically in apology**falls*

So I have been in Scotland. (!!!) Kind of unfortunate timing, though, with a math test due, several lessons of math due, plus shopping and generally getting ready for a trip to Florida in June. But.....we progress.

Plus, I'd like to take this time to apologize for my sister's spamming comments. She thought she was just so hilarious. Haha.

:D

But, I do plan on doing short stories for Winchester, Windsor, and Scotland, but working on my other story and exams and stuff, I probably will delay that until the summer. :)

Sooooo....all this is to introduce...

The Post!!!!!

But...I have nothing to post about, so please enjoy this:







And then for some motivation:




And here's a joke.

So this guy wanted to go to a party so he had to go rent a suit, and that was line was long. And then he wanted to rent a limo (expensive tastes, I know. :)) and there was a line. And then he went to go get punch at the party and there was no punchline.

So, yeah. By the way, I didn't come up with that. I got it off Pinterest. :)

Happy Writing!
Scarlett


Thursday, 24 April 2014

The dragon, the birthday girl, and the train

Happy Saint George Day! (Ahem, it was yesterday, but...) Yesterday we went ice skating with some friends, which was oodles of fun! :) And Monday we went to Winchester, which was so much fun. Really, it was tons of fun. We walked mostly (So British, I know. :D) and climbed a hill which afforded us a great view of the countryside. Indeed, a short story will be written. Maybe. :)

But, another important holiday: Easter. I should not have eaten all that chocolate. Regrets. So many regrets. :D We went to the sunrise service instead of the regular church service. It was really nice, despite having to wake up at 5:30.

And one more thing before we cut to the chase.........Happy Birthday, Grammy! :D I wish we could be there with you. :)

But now to cut to the post...

A revelation in the middle of a train ride. I was coming back from hanging with some amazing people  who gave us polish food for lunch and took us for milkshakes. I had a coke float. It was amazing.

But, to the point, I must get.

In the Hunger Games, in the third book and even toward the end of the second book, Katniss was soooo irritating. And in Allegiant and Insurgent, Tris is well on her way to be irritating. (I haven't finished Allegiant so she might become less irritating...)

But it's my observation that towards the end of a series, a novel, or even just a story, the character becomes way, way, way more irritating. Based on my observations, (That should have been read in a fancy British voice...:D) I have discovered ways that the character becomes irritating.

1. They get tired

They're not actually tired, the character is just tired. (As in a tired room) You see them, the same character you've been reading about for 100+ pages. Imagine getting locked in a room with a single person. And this person goes on, and on, and on, and on about paper. And for three whole days, you get to hear about paper. Pretty boring, huh? But if this paper-addict happened to change the topic to ice cream, then electricity, then their favorite bands, then Doctor Who, then paper again, and then the circus, you'd be way more interested and by the time three days are up, you guys are best buds. Characters can either be the first or the second guy. They don't have to be personality-wise "interesting" but they do have to be character-wise "interesting." (As in character flaws, inner struggles, etc.)

2. They become confident

Confidence in a character is a good thing. But to much confidence is like reading about a statue doing all this stuff. They never have any inner conflicts. See number one why that is terrible. There is an exception. Suppose this character has to trade her emotions for something, say a handsome prince. Now when she should be inwardly conflicted (she can either kill someone or they will grow up to be the next Hitler) she has no emotions and therefore has no inner conflict. Another exception: If they are a sociopath/psychopath. So basically if they are like Sherlock. :)

3. They have no friends

In the Hunger Games, Katniss literally has one friend: Peeta. Friends, multiple friends, are like washing down a cookie (the protagonist) with milk (the friends). They offer relief from the main character, which is never a bad thing. :D

Even if an author did all of these things correct, to some extent, the protag will always be irritating. I mean, as amazing as I am, imagine having to sit next to me on a three-year long flight or something. Yes, you would love to kill me then too. :)

Happy Writing!
Scarlett

Sunday, 13 April 2014

Hello, goodbye

Hello, Internet-ies! I recently have had a rather, er, sad trip to Windsor Castle. :\ It was freezing cold. Freezing. Now, if everyone hadn’t have worn light coats we might have been happier, but, hey. :) And we had to wait in long lines for everything. Everything. But, aside from that, it was awesome! The castle was whole and still nice. (Surprisingly...) and the shopping was awesome. (I asked almost all of my friends what they liked best about Windsor. The answer? Shopping. :D) But, as is the case when I travel, I will have a short story out about Windsor. :)

Anyhow....

So this is a bit random, but I have this problem, which has before been mentioned. I am impatient. No joke, totally impatient in planning and making introductions of the characters.

And, usually due to my impatience, I often rush into the climax after about two-three chapters. Not good. Based on personal experience, here are some tips I came up with to slow down, add detail, etc.

1. Listen to music

Music is one of my favorite things in the world. Even though I can't create it at all, I can listen to it. Listening to music really helps you to slow down. Use it as a timer even, if there is need. Here are some songs I like to use as timers:

-Oblivion by Bastille
-Carrizs by Bibio (Wordless for about two minutes of the song)
-Sarah by Diplo (Wordless until last 30 seconds. I recommend skipping over the lyrics though)
-Cheap Sunglasses by RAC
-Best Day of My Life by American Authors
-The Man by Aloe Blacc
-Mirror Maru by Cashmere Cat (Wordless)

And I just found a streaming music site that lets you find song without words. (This is a good station for writing, writing blocks, etc. But it also has some other great stations, not just this one. :)) http://8tracks.com/seatosky/read-write-repeat

2. Set a goal

Important, important. Besides music, I use chapters as a timer. For instance, in chapter 10 this and this might happen. That way I don't rush into the climax or whatever.

3. Fill 'er up!

In number 2, I said I set goals. So lets say I'm being my usual derpty derp self and am stuck on Chapter 9 and just want to get to Chapter 10. So now lets add detail. I find the easiest way for me is to do descriptions, but there's only so many descriptions I can put in a chapter. Assuming I want all my chapters to be five-ten pages long, after adding as many descriptions as I can, I need more details. This is what I then love to do: shock of all shocks, plan!

I go back, and since I know what the climax will be, put in little hints, circumstances, and conflicts that lead to the climax. This, like descriptions, can get heavy, so I can only put in about two-three of these gems.

Other than that, I just add in more experiences. Make her meet another character, let the character go have fun. If you need even more things: change your point of view. Focus on a character who might join her later, might turn out to be the villain.

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So that's it! Perhaps it helped, perhaps it didn't. But, my story, er, well...I've finished eight chapters, but unfortunately, as is the case with writing sprees, I expended all my creative juices for a while, at least on that story, so it might be some time before you hear about it again. :) Since I can't go without writing though, I was thinking of doing a story from a villain's point of view. Any comments?

Happy Writing!
Scarlet




Thursday, 10 April 2014

People, this is an important step!

Yes, yes it is, my dear people of the World Wide Web. This step, you ask?

The Theme!

I happen to forget to add a theme. All the time. Every single time. Heres something you should know about me: Im about as patient as, er, an impatient person. Seriously, I hate planning stories. Screw that, let’s just sit down and write. Yep, not the greatest trait.

So, since I usually don’t plan, I often forget to put in a theme. It’s alright; go hang your head at my inability. :)

But, regardless, theme’s are important. One of the first (give or take) things I do when I first read a book is to determine the theme. (An example, you ask....) Well, let’s just use a well-known example: the Hunger Games. War/mindless killing is evil. That’s pretty apparent, to anyone who’s read the books. Another? Ender’s Game. I intereptreted the theme as to not abuse your power. You see example of power abusers (Peter, Colonel Gragg (at least to some extent) and Mazer Rackham.) but Ender and Valentine (and to some extent Mazer Rackham) do not abuse their power.

So, finding a theme is always the hardest part for me. I don’t know bout you...but it takes me weeks to come up with even a lame terrible one. Sad, for an author.

And this post is really just to remind people: THE THEME IS IMPORTANT.

When you're planning a new ground-breaking story, plan a theme as well. Trust me, it saves a ton of time later. :)

Happy Writing!
Scarlet

Btw, wisdom from a six year old girl: The Big Bang Theory is dumb. How would there be anything before the Big Bang to make the Big Bang?


Monday, 7 April 2014

*sob**laughs**aggressively kills someone*

Hey, now! What's up? Nothing bad, I hope. Well.....let me just tell ya: I went to my first dance. Which, as it does, is always important. It was a vintage barn dance for some of my friend's 16th birthday. It was tons of fun! And, being one of the most awkward people every created, I was nervous that I would have no partners whatsoever, but luckily, that was not the case. :) Plus, it was vintage so all in all it was a great night.

Picture? Fine, if you insist...



I'm the one second to last, left hand side, black and white dress. :) Tons of people didn't go vintage, sadly. :(

And...I went to see Divergent on opening day here in London. (Sadly the midnight premiere was limited to 18 years and up....) But it was amazing! Theo James was the perfect person for Tobias. Ah, it was so great. Ahem, for those of you *pointed look* who wasn't a fan of Divergent, you should still go see it. It was great.

And, I have discovered a great song that I have been searching for for literally months: Home by Philip Philips. Plus his other songs (Gone, gone, gone and Raging Fire) are amazing. Plus Raging Fire is such a great worship song without being one of those strictly worship song. Go check it out. (And my older sister wants me to tell ya'll about this guy, Parry Gripp, who does ridiculous songs.)

ANYWAYSSSSSS...... moving on....

All of those good emotions. (Well, maybe not aggressively killing someone...:D) Mmm...what every reader wants. (Coming from a point of a fangirl, eh, not so much.) Now, the emotions I'm talking about is not the Moffat/Gatiss/T.Davies/Roth/Collins "Right in the feel!" emotion, I'm talking about emotion. (Hmm...that cleared it right up...)

Let's say that again: Emotion as in the character's emotion.

So, if you're following me, moving on.

Number one rule of adding emotion: They gotta do what they gotta do. If they're distressed, let them wring their hands. Sad, cry. Happy..Well, my happiness emotions range from a smile to jump on people and scream and pull out ice cream and pet a puppy, so really, no help for you on happiness. :D

How do you know what a character should do if they're sad, happy, etc? Well, all creative people have to not be afraid to look stupid. If this means acting out what you have to do in all it's dramatic glory...

"Oh, Nash!"
*Sinks to knees*
(In a deep voice) "Raven!"
"I'm dying, Nash..."
*Dramatically falls to the floor, groaning.*
*Exaggeratedly uses last breath to say, "I..." and then rolls over and...*
*Mom walks in*

"What are you doing?"
"Er..."

Trust me, it's worse when your sister has a friend over and they walk in.

So, yep, acting it out is good. Plus, reading helps. Most people react the same way when they're emotional. I know from Lie To Me. (yes another TV show) It's actually really helpful in writing. So this guy studies faces for lies and all, but it tells ya how people react in certain circumstances.

After your character is doing all the right things, the next step is circumstances.

Circumstances are very important, and I'll do a post on them later, but for now, make your circumstances reflect emotions. Observe:

[a character is suffering the loss of a family member]

I stared at the bright pink wall, numbed. Aunt Charlotte was gone. I would never hear her laugh, or have her take me for a walk, while pointing out the flowers. The sun was shining, and birds chirping, and soon Uncle Rex sat down beside me.
"Lemonade, cookies?"

Now, that paragraph isn't awesome; I just bolted that out right now. Now: Observe.

I stared at the dark mahogany wood of the old, dusty house. Aunt Charlotte was gone. I would never hear her laugh, or have her take me from a walk, telling me about the flowers. Like my mood, the sky was dark, sad; it was raining and streaks of lightning flashed outside. Uncle Rex sat down beside me.
"Tea?"

Clearly, the second paragraph reflects this character's emotion. Now, there is an exception to this rule, as usual. If your going for that stunningly different way, to prove how wrong it is, just ignore this little bit.

Now, next step. So you have characters, circumstances, and now you.

The writing of an emotional scene is liking that one experiment in Apologia, where you had to balance a paper clip on water by balancing it on a string. You have to go very, very, very, verrrryyyy gently. (Needless to say, the experiment was very hard and often didn't work)

You have to be very careful on how you say things.

For instance:

"Nash died."

versus...

"Nash slipped away, his body going cold, his eyes unseeing. He was gone."

Now, like all the other rules, you might prefer to do the first instance, as it might fit your writing style. But, pretending that doesn't matter, it's better to write the second one. :)

You also have to be concise.

If you drag out a scene:

"I cradled Nash in my arms as he slipped away. His body went cold and white, and his eyes were unseeing. I felt his life leave his body, etc."

I tend to skip over scenes like that. So, short, but not too short. Of course, this is coming from my style and my preference of reading. Everyone has their own style.

Happy Writing!
Scarlet

Thursday, 3 April 2014

I don’t like your hero

Harsh words, only to often used. Hero’s are tricky things, they are. You can have heroes who you absolutely love, you literally would follow them to the end of the world. Or, you can have those heroes who you absolutely hate.

Yep, I have had several hateable heroes, sad to say. So, here ten tips to a likeable characters.

1. Silence isn’t golden

No one likes a character who hides away in the corner, quiet and not doing much. The more your hero does, the more likable they get. (Now, this is not always the case, but more often than not, it is.) Think about it, if Katniss hadn’t done anything, no one would like her. So, action is the biggest defining point of a likable hero.

2. Be on your best behavior

As a hero, you have to have good morals. Standing up for justice, honor, and bravery. No one wants a hero with loose morals. So, best behaviour is a must. This usually plays out as standing up for the weak. This is the best time to remember this: WWCAD? What would Captain America do?

3. Love and be loved

They have to be liked. (This doesn’t have to be a love-love, but more of a friendship love. Actually, in Greek there are four kinds of love: Agape is a spiritual love, Eros is a romantic love, Philia is friendship love, and Storge is love for family. Know you now, right?) Friends are a need. Like my mother always says, “If someone doesn’t have friends, there’s usually a reason.” So, if a character is friendless usually you think, “Hmm...that’s suspicious.”

4. A battle of wits you say? Well, you appear to be unarmed.

A hero needs wit and humor. Lets face it, no humor to lighten things up gets really, reeaaallyy, rrrreeeaaaallllyyyy, rrreeeaaalllyyyyy heavy. Now, if you have one character who is usually making jokes, that’s all fun and games until you realize how lame and serious your hero is. Sooooo....word of warning, unless you want to have to rewrite your hero.....make them witty and all that bundle of laughs.

5. The Daleks do not understand!! Explain!! EXPLAIN!!!

(If you’re wondering, the Daleks are villains in Doctor Who. Seeing as they’re robots, they often do not understand and have to say the afore quote.) We all love those bumbling, idiotic heroes. But if your hero is not competent, just forget it. I mean, that is the point of a hero, to come up on top. And if that’s not possible, well...

6. Determined as ever...

If your hero is not determined to overcome the challenge, that is not a hero. Lets add in a few plot twists and some hardships, and bingo, the hero decides, mmm, better not. So, he has to have determination. I don’t know whether that is something like Sam and Dean Winchester, who are after vengeance, or the Doctor, who saves people because he’s seen to much destruction and death. That’s really up to you, but he has to have determination.

7. Brave

This might be stating the obvious, but he has to be brave. This goes along with #1, if they are not brave, they probably won’t be doing much. Naturally this excludes those heroes who are the weak, all of the sudden saving everybody kinda guy. :)

8. Abnegation at heart

Your hero has to be selfless. I mean, selfless. Using logic, you can see how this is a must. If they’re not selfless, they probably aren’t gonna risk their lives to save others. Just the way it is. Well, of course, unless they have a turn around right before the climax.

9. You attract more flies with honey than vinegar...

You attract more loyal followers if you are kind rather than sour...words of advice to a hero. Kindness is one of the defining traits of most hero’s. Some being Captain America, Giselle from Enchanted, and really any princess or Disney hero. :)

10. Circumstances

This is one thing that will make your character be liked: circumstances. A truly evil villain, a lying scumbag, a little backstabber, some unfortunate friends who have no morality or anything to live for, and suddenly...I love the hero! Now, this only works in small doses, and in certain stories. Sticking to Captain America, Loki is one of those villains that you love and don't necessarily hate. They are like the classy gentleman who just happen to be evil. So, if you have a villain like that, sorry, your hero isn't gonna gain much love via circumstances. Perfect example, Moriarty and Sherlock. Ehehehe...I knew I'd fit something Sherlock into this post...:D

Happy Writing!
Scarlet




Wednesday, 26 March 2014

Crazy hectic life and all that.....

Yep, that’s my life right now. I have not had anytime to sit down and work on this blog. I've only had time to jot down a few paragraphs on my story. But enough about me. So this awesome gal had a character quiz! (Yay!!) So I already took for Raven (The quiz I did on Raven was not this Raven. I stole the names Raven and Nash though because I liked them so much. If you're wondering, that 'small' project is taking a long time and it is being put on hold. :D) And I decided it's only fitting to let another of my characters take it, right? So...my next candidate.... (Instead of the protagonist because how boring would that be?!)

NASH!

And all the people go...YAY!

Alright-y then.

Lights...! Camera...! Action...!


Nash

Character name: Nathaniel Sharp. Nash for short.
Age: Roughly 18 or so.
Appearance: Just google Lee Pace. Seriously, do it. (That is seriously almost exactly as I pictured Nash) 

1. What do you know about this character now that he doesn't know yet?
 He has a major weakness for revenge.
2. What is this character's greatest flaw?
He doesn't forgive quickly.
3. What do you know about this character that she would never admit?
Nash is deathly afraid of heights above water. Heights in general don't scare him.
4. What is this character's greatest asset?
His strength.
5. If this character could choose a different identity, who would she be?
He would be a Rider, who ended the other three Rider's lives, while dying a dramatic death.
6. What music does this character sing when no one else is around?
He would sing the Fray or something quiet and soothing.
7. In what or whom does this character have the greatest faith?
Though he would never admit it, Raven.  
8. What is this character's favorite movie?
If he knew what a movie was, it would be the TV show Supernatural.
9. Does this character have a favorite article of clothing?
Nope. 
10. Does this character have a vice?  Name it.
He underestimates his enemy.
11. Name this character's favorite living/dead person.
His sister, who happens to be dead.
12. What is this character's secret wish?
To start a revolution against the Riders.
13. What is this character's proudest achievement?
It's yet to happen.
14. Describe this character's most embarrassing moment.
When he had been mocking someone he was sword fighting, and they ended up winning. He had bet all Raven and his money he would win.
15. What is this character's deepest regret?
That he let his sister move away. She ended up dying.
16. What is this character's greatest fear?
 That he will die a very plain and unimportant death.  
17. Describe this character's most devastating moment.
When he watched a riot in the town. He was wounded, and almost the whole crowd was killed, including his father and brother.
18. What is this character's greatest achievement?
 Keeping Raven and himself alive. 
19. What is this character's greatest hope?
That he will make a difference in society. Or inspire a revolution to overthrow the Riders.
20. Does this character have an obsession?  Name it.
Defeating the Riders. That's why he keeps practicing sword fighting.
21. What is this character's greatest disappointment?
His mother and father split up the family (Himself, two twin brothers, his sister) He, his sister and father lived together. One of the twin brothers ran away and joined them, then, he and Nash's father were killed, leaving Nash to take care of his sister, India. His mother died soon after, and Nash doesn't know what happened to his other brother.
22. What is this character's worst nightmare?
That the Riders will reign forever.
23. Whom does this character most wish to please?  Why?
 Raven. She reminds him of his sister. 
24. Describe this character's mother.
 She was a very beautiful and charming woman. She was very shallow. She married his father for his money, but when he gave his money to the war cause against Cant, which failed leaving the Sharp's with no money, she applied for a divorce. 
25. Describe this character's father.
William was a tall, handsome, fiery man. He could have had his choice of any girl in the kingdom. He cared more about a revolution than his children.
26. If she had to choose, with whom would this character prefer to live?
 He would live with his sister and her husband, if they were still alive. 
27. Where does this character fall in birth order?  What effect does this have?
  The oldest. He provided for the whole family when their father was off at a rally. 
28. Describe this character's siblings or other close relatives.
  Everyone except one of the twin brothers was serious and fiery. 
29. Describe this character's bedroom.  Include three cherished items.
  He usually sleeps in the mountains, as his preferred sleeping place. His sword, a picture of his family, and a bullet he found on the mountains. Guns had long since been destroyed, and most bullets. He hoped this would kill one of the Riders. 
30. What is this character's birth date?  How does this character manifest traits of his/her astrological sign?
He was born on April 19. I have no idea what his astrological sign is and I don't think anyone really cares. Moving on.
31. If this character had to live in seclusion for six months, what six items would she bring?
The afore mentioned three items, and food, water, and a blanket.
32. What makes this character angry?
 When someone praises any of the Riders. 
33. What calms this character?
The sound of the sea.
34. List the circumstances over which this character has no control.
  The weather. 
35. What wakes this character in the middle of the night?
Thunder will remind him of the day his father and one brother died.
36. How would a stranger describe this character?
Serious, fiery, strange.
37. What does this character resolve to do differently every morning?
 Not making hasty decisions.
48. Who depends on this character?  Why?
Raven. Raven has no family that she knows of.
49. If this character knew she had exactly one month to live, what would she do?
He would try to find an old friend that he hasn't heard from for two years.
50. How would a dear friend or relative describe this character?
As a serious  boy who cared about only a handful of things.
51. What is this character's most noticeable physical attribute?
  His strength.
52. What is this character hiding from himself?
Doubt.

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 So how'd ya like that? Nash is one of my more mundane, straightforward characters. He doesn't really see grey. 

But, I'll probably do this quiz for another of my characters. :) Maybe I'll have to do the protagonist after all. 

Happy Writing!
Scarlet

Monday, 10 March 2014

And....Finally!

Hello, hello. Back again, after a very busy time of a writing high. Yep, completed five chapters of my story. Yay yay!! Actually, on the subject of the story, I decided to change it to an allegory. So, I kept the plot, but I changed the names and some of the other things. Characters are all the same, but I did add three more side villains. Just needed more. :D So, enjoy chapter one. (Yes, pinch yourself, it's finally ready. :D) Oh, and any comments or suggestions would be awesome! :)

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Chapter One


Seeing the sun rise is beautiful. The colors paint so many stories; the sky welcomes them with open arms. The grass even sparkles. Seeing the sunrise over a mountain, with the embers of a fire burning out, waking up with nothing over your head, is astounding. It’s as if the world is waking up just for you.


I sit up, rubbing my head, enjoying the view. Nash is already up, stirring the flames back to life. His pack is neatly packed up, ready to go. He is fully dressed, and looks as if he has already done his morning excercise.


“Morning,” he says gruffly.
“Good morning.”
“Here, do your exercises. We still have fifteen minutes before breakfast.”


I stand, shaking out the leaves. I’m already dressed, so all I have to do is strap on my swords, which I do. Carefully, I make my way over the rocks slick with dew to a flat ledge, with room enough to move.


For less than five minutes I practice, making exaggerated movements, working on footwork, and hacking down imaginary foes. Suddenly, a voice behind me pipes up.


“You ain’t never going to beat no one with moves like that, heh.”


Nash sits behind me, imitating the speech of the mountain men. He has his dagger in his hand. I suppose he’s been watching me the whole time. He moves quieter than night, and has a skill at blending in in plain sight.


He stands up, moving quickly and calculated. Before I know it, he has his knife pressed to my throat. I don’t struggle, knowing from past experiences that it’s useless to do so. So instead I stand, slowly getting my elbow into position.


Nash may be stronger than me, but he leaves too many weak spots, and underestimates his enemies. Quickly, I use my elbow to hit his nose. He recoils, clutching his bleeding nose. He curses.


We circle each other, like two cats waiting to attack. Finally, I leap forward, wielding my sword. I swing, he dodges. Quickly he attacks from behind, jumping on my back. It is all I can do to stay up. But by twisting and writhing I slip out of his grip.


For a rousing twenty minutes we continue in this way, me darting, him attacking. It only ended when he has both my swords pointed at me.


We eat our breakfast quickly, then hoist our packs and move out. I look back as we leave our little camp. It has been our camp for a week, which is longer than most of our other camps. But Nash has been getting antsy, or so he told me. I think he is just nervous. He’s always nervous.


This time, we take a trail going towards the White Rider’s palace. Cant is the dictator, or the Electorate, as he refers to himself, of Pangea. Of course, this is disputed. The other three Riders are in control of most other places in Pangea. But, the four Riders seem to have a system worked out over who was in charge.


Before I realize it, we are in sight of Tyranel, the town surrounding Cant’s fortress. I pause, wondering why we are going to a city. We never go to cities. It’s too dangerous, Nash says, too easy to get lost, to die in. Even though that’s true, we both know that’s not the reason we stay away. We’ve dealt with worse things in the small villages we go to than the city has to offer. But both of us have secrets. Sad, dark, painful secrets.


But Nash doesn’t stop, he just waves me on. Sucking up my courage, I follow.


The city hasn’t changed much since I’ve last been in it, some two years ago. It stil isl a rough mix of glass, concrete, and stone. The trains rattle the older structures. People rush past, heads down. Smells of fragrant spices mingle with the smell of blood and raw meat from the butchers. Rith stand at every corner, and several hooded characters eye us.


“Spys.” Nash whispers.


Venders shove used wares in our faces, and merchants shout and wave glittering gold. Large screens hang off most walls, every hundred meters or so. The logo of Tyranel is plastered on them. Flags decorated in the deep red and white, depicting a bow and a crown, hang everywhere. People even wear them in their hair.


Nash leads the way through the thick crowd to a clearing. A cluster of people are gathered round a street performer. A sword fighter. Nash signals me closer.


“I’m gonna, you know, do what we do.”
“Excuse me? Do what we do? Walk?”


He sighs and pinches his nose.


“No, pebble brain, not walk. Fight him!”
“Ohhhh. Right.”
“Yeah, right. Right, you know the drill, heh?”
“Yeah, uh, I go steal things and you fight. Yep.”
“Right. Meet you at the gates.”


Nash steps through the crowd. He looks small. The swordfighter turns when Nash yells at him.


He looks him over for a minute, then seems to lose interest.


“Hey! I challenge you to a fight!”


This gets his attention.


“You miniscule dwarf! Storge not fight dwarf!” A few in the crowd laugh. Nash huffs impatiently.
“I’m not a dwarf. In fact, I bet I could beat you, too.”
“Storge not be beaten by dwarf! Storge get angry! Storge accept challenge!”


With a loud bellow, the fight was on.


Several shopkeepers left their stalls and crowded around to watch. Acting natural, I began taking anything that looked valuable.


In the background, I could hear Nash taunting Storge.


“How’s that feel?” He asked after he landed a good blow on his chin.
“Storge not feel anything! Storge not feel!”


“Ah, you need a manual to put this fight back together?”
“Storge doesn’t need manual!”


I had finished. I am just about to head to the gate, when suddenly I see a shop full of books. Books are not printed anymore. The only books you can get are at licensed book shops, of which there are none too many.


Someone had once let me read a book. Everyone could read, but mostly it was notices, documents on wars, royal proclamations. I had loved the book. All my life I hadn’t forgotten that book. It was about a boy genius, an outcast, who saves the world. Aliens were attacking, and through clever deception, the military trick him into leading a war, which in the process kills the whole of the alien population. But he finds one queen alien egg, and searches the star to find a home for them to live in.


So I stepped into the book store. It smelled strange, like mold and water. The shopkeeper is in the back, so I quickly begin searching for a book. I am about to leave with a book about becoming fearless, but I dislodge another book when I grab it. It falls to the floor, it’s title just like the book I read.


Without a moments hesitation I grab it, then rush out of the store, hearing a shout behind me. Suddenly Rith are beginning to get to close. I dash into an alley, and skid to a halt. Rith block the exit and the entrance. The only way out is through the Rith. Or up. I decide that since I can’t very well jump twenty feet in the air, and I can’t push through 100 pounds of metal, I should sweet talk my way out. I don’t really know if that’ll work, but it’s my only hope.


“Uh, hello. Can I help you?” They don’t do anything. “You see, I was just on my way out. I’m leaving to go live with my, er, fiance. Yup, my fiance, because I have one. And he’s my fiance.” I realize too late I sound like I am either dumb or just plain weird. Or lying. I choose to hope that the Rith have no concept of lying. They must not because they don’t move or react in any way.


Then they charge. I’m going to be sandwiched between 200 pounds of metal if I don’t do anything. And that’s when I see a rope hanging off a building.


Not waiting to question if the rope will hold me, I pull myself up on it. It falls limp to the ground, me on it. Stunned, I feel the Rith circle me. In their monotone voice, one orders me to my feet.


“Felon, you must stand up and follow us to Cant’s palace.”
“Okay, okay. Just give me a minute.”
“The Rith do not give minutes to felons.”
“Right, all right. I did just fall of a rope.”
“Correction: The rope fell off.”
“Uh-huh. The rope fell off. Alright, blame it on whoever you want. Fine by me.”
“We are not fine by you.”
“Excuse me?” I am beginning to enjoy myself.
“We are not fine by you.”
“You got that right.”


The Rith stare at me. One finally responds.


“We are confused by your words.”
“Yep. Me too.”
“Do you mean you are too confused by your words.”
“Maybe.”
“Maybe we are too.”
“Okay, then. Good to know.”
“We know good.”


This time, I’m confused. It might be because of the stupidity of the Rith or the falling off the rope.


“Uh-huh. Sure. I’m gonna, uh, I’m gonna go now.”


I stand up. The Rith don’t try to stop me. I try to calmly walk away, but I still walk faster than normal. Holding my breath, I walk down another road, but no Rith come for me. Did I just talk my way out of an arrest?


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We meet back at the gate, like arranged. Apparently, Nash won.


“As you can imagine, Storge wasn’t so happy. I think he’s trying to get me arrested, but none of the Rith will listen.” We both laughed.
“So then, whad’ya get?”
“Three engraved daggers - I figure we can get at least enough money to buy us some sword polish - a gold ring, some bread and fruit, three cases of wine - I figure Mr. Siltson will be interested - and two pairs of glasses.”
“Let me see!” We both put them on. Instead of just seeing the world, we see information about the world.
“Alright, we keep one pair, we sell the other.” He instructs.
“And,” I continue, “best for last.”


I hold up to sets of clothes, one black, one forest green.


We both look down at our clothes. Dusty, worn, too small, and worst of all, white. White like the Rith’s dress. White like Cant. White like Tyranel.


Hastily we pull them on, even putting our weapons on. For Nash it’s a dagger. For me it’s two swords, crossed in an “X” on my back.


“Now,” Nash says, “We make camp. You were right, we’re practically in the city limits. So, I think we might as well just make useful out of the city and sleep in a bed for a change. Come on then, don’t lag.”


Shocked, I stand up, hoisting on my pack, and follow Nash.




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Myron decided that she loved what she did. It wasn't a perfect job, it didn't have instant rewards, but it gave her pleasure. The thrill, the satisfaction, the strange repulsion that resulted in an understanding of it. At first she had hated it. The bloody gore and moral dilemma had been enough to make Myron wish she had never gotten into the industry. But soon, partly coaxed by Gad, she fell in a disgusting love with it. But just as she had been enjoying her job, they had had to stopped.


The saying "secrets can kill" had never meant much to Myron. Everyone in her life had never wanted to hide anything from her. Myron, the good, sweet, little girl, who no one wanted to hurt. But Myron wasn't sure those words still described her.


Secrets can kill. They can bring pain and suffering and heartbreak. And she and Gad had found secrets that could and would kill.


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It started off as a normal work day. She and Gad had marched into the "Capitol" wearing the white and blue outfit of their position. Commander Hyram had been waiting, drumming his hands on the table.


"543 and 7-1, you're late. Unacceptable." He paused, but he wasn't finished. "We watch houses night and day, but even our extensive research cannot fortell everything. However, we can get some details. Our methods...They don't matter in the big scheme of things. The ends justify the means, neh?"
"Yes sir." They muttered.
"Now where was I...Ah yes! The ends justify the means. But we cannot justify the means if there is no end. You following, pebble brains? I cannot afford to have employees like you who risk throwing of the whole balance. One grain of rice can tip the scales. Now, by being late, you could have let Mr. 7776890 slip through our fingers. He could have finally gotten an audience with Mr. Evil, our dearest ruler. He could have gone for a pint, gone for a picnic, gone forever. Most of our jobs have an hour window. You miss that...you have an angry client. So, next time, banana butts, you will be cut. Oh, in every sense of the word."


Slowly he moved away from them. Mal handed them a file.


"Sorry ‘bout the chew out. You know C. Hyram, gets worked up over the littlest of things. A client has complained about the time crunch. Weapons on the wall!"


Gad moved slower today than normal, but Myron decided today's job was a quick one. She herself had gone over the prep files, she knew a little about 7776890. She knew that his name was Sid Santerel and he was in his sixties. He owned a press company pushing for religious freedom, among other shockingly rebellious views. Apparently he had an enemy. Myron suspected it was Cant himself.


They each selected three weapons, hiding them in their clothes. Sid's house was in the richer part of town, apparently his newspaper sold well. They had to hop on a train, illegally of course. They stood out on the train; it was mostly rich people. They didn't really have much of a ride, the train traveled fifty miles in less than five minutes. Santerel's house was a short walk from the station.


His house had once been magnificent, Myron could tell. It was made of stone, like most houses, but had intricate carvings. She noted with a chill they were of Rith fighting humans. Vines had long since claimed the house as their own. Windows, doors, everything was overgrown with weeds. The rusted gates creaked when Gad pushed them open. They didn't bother to sneak up the drive. They stood, unsure of what to do, on the parapet. Suddenly the door flew open. A small old man stood hunched over, peering through strong round glasses at them, a frog like expression on his face.


“Hello, there!” He smiled.
“Er, hello, sir.” Gad said.
“Ah, British, I see.”
“Just him. Uh, we’re here with a newspaper.”


His face turned sour.


“No, I will not sell the newspaper, I will not come work for you, and I will not give you my tricks of the trade.”
“Uh, actually,” Gad spoke up, “we are just going to do an article about your home life. Don’t worry, we won’t pry!”


They both put on a peppy interviewer face. Gad looked like he was in pain.


“Ah, shucks. We did they have to send kids over? How could I say no? Alright come on in. Don’t get mud on the carpet!”


The inside suited a normal life, contradicting the outside. They were led to a warm cozy looking sitting room. He pointed to a sofa for them, and settled himself into overstuffed faded chair near a fireplace.


"Ah, I would sit in the parlour, but I need a fire. Getting old is no fun in winter." He smiled a toothless smile. “So what would you like to know about Wormwood?”
"Wormwood?" Gad asked.
"Aye, Wormwood. This great hall is Wormwood! It was my grandfather's for generations, and now mine. This is were I think! This is my lab, my printing press, my love!"
"Who names their "love" Wormwood?" Gad asked.
"Ah, well that is something you British would never understand, love. It's far too complex for minds as single minded as yours." He cackled.
"Wormwood isn't the name of your newspaper though, is it?" Myron asked.
"Nah. The Herald of Hope. I wanted it to be Wormwood, but would you buy a paper named that?"


Myron found herself laughing. She quickly silenced herself.


"But you never answered my question: what brings you here?"
"Well, we were..." She started, then was interrupted by Gad.
"But why Wormwood?"
"Why not, neh?"
"But it doesn't really inspire love, or positive feelings. Sort of...disgust."
"Not for me it doesn't. Wormwood is my life's work. It had made up who I am all my life."
"I thought that press was your life." Myron asked. Sid looked from Gad to Myron.
"Well, I hope you have a long time and need a great story for your newspaper, kiddies. I've been wanting  to tell this story for a long time, and now here is an audience! So, you want a story. This is a fantastic tale of treachery, deceit, revenge, and love. This is the story of my life."


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"I remember going to live with me old grandpop. I don't remember me old man dying, or my mum dying, me sister. But I do remember walking up the drive to Wormwood, then of course known as Humble Park. Well, that was it's official and proper name, but most just called it Hummy Park. Don't ask me why, it just was. Probably some street boys misread the sign and the name stuck. Well, anyhow, I was a lanky boy of 12, young and ready for the world. But me old grandpop wasn't exactly a loving Mrs, if you know what I mean. Of course, I was scared for, received all the attention in the world from the servants, but not from pops. I adored him, that old coot. He did nothing great, but he made me think. I began imitating him, experimenting with chemicals and the likes. I even went past the line and experimented on animals, but I soon stopped that. Anyway, at age fifteen, my pop finally paid attention to me, after a particularly successful experiment. He took me into his confidence. He was working on something, something he said would change Hummy Park for the better. Now, it was around this time, neh, that Cant came into power, along with the other Riders.


"One day, after me old pops and me had been working on the experiment for, oh...about a month or two by then, his ambiguousness called on us. Of course it was about the experiment. It became known as Experiment 56.


"So anyhow, now the real story begins.


"Pops passed away two years later, when I was but 19. Instead of running to college, I kept working on old 56. Meanwhile, one of my pop's spies, Sadie Lankurd, was her name. Well, never mind that, she reported to me, now old pappy was gone in the grave. She said that pop's death wasn't normal.


"Naturally I put effort into finding out what happened. Then, I did find out. Sadie had been leading this effort, and she found out what happened. Experiment 56 had failed, flopped, reacted. It was what killed me pops.


"Well now anyways, I was insistent on destroying 56. Luckily, Sadie managed to stop me. At this point, I decided to change everything I could that reminded me of pops, since I had grown fond of him, and the pain was still there.


"So I changed this old place to Wormwood, you know, from the Bible. I even changed my name to Sid Santerel from Cal Foster.


"I continued the experiment. Over time, Cant lost interest. So I had to find my own financier. None were interested, so I created a newspaper to get money. No one could guess I would become famous, rich, popular.


"Once more, 56 flopped. This time altogether Cant forbid me from working on it. I started to in secret and became a strict hater of Cant."


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When he had finished his monologue, Gad and Myron exchanged looks. Experiment 56? Myron was about to ask what Experiment 56 was, when Gad asked:


"Wormwood from the Bible? You a Christian? You do know that's forbidden, to be a Christian?" "Hell, yes I know that. But still that doesn't stop me. How do you expect to go through life just serving yourself? Sooner or later you'll realize that you need something more in life, something bigger than you. Someone powerful. I found that out the hard way. Don't follow down my path." He paused. "But of course you're thinking I'm just a stranger and that I am a crazy old coot. Well, do as you please."


There was an uncomfortable silence.


"Um, Mr. Foster, er, Santerel?"
"Please, Cal."
"Alright, uh, Cal. What, what is Experiment 56, exactly?"
"Ah."


Cal seemed to grow remorseful, sad. With a breaking voice, he answered. "Uh, Experiment 56? It...it...Well, it's easier to explain if you see it. Come along then!"


He quickly hopped out of his chair and beckoned us to follow. This man seemed as attracted to mood swings as a bee is to flowers. They followed, but Gad pulled Myron aside. "Ahem, we're here to, uh, do the do, not learn about some kooky experiment!"
"Think of it as fulfilling this man's dying wish, neh? Now, we can't very well just do the do on him without showing a little respect. Come on. For me, at least."


Gad sighed. "Yeah. Whatever, love."


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For the first time in two years, Nash and I  sleep in  warm beds, no bugs, no wild animals, no elements to wake us up. Nothing to run from, nothing to shiver at, nothing to fear.


Nothing to fear, just like the legendary Azaria. I like thinking that I have nothing to fear. Nothing to fear.

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So that's that. Let me know what you think!!

Happy Writing!
Scarlet